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• Messages : 4335
• I' am : 29
• Type of creature : I'm an elemantary witch


• Location : Not very far away from my home, my hotel
• Room N° : Isilda's area, my area doesn't have number
• Copyright : (c) Piichou & Tumblr
• Here since : 2008-12-05
I prefer to tell you that I am not the person you thought. I can be dangerous as I can be lovely & openminded. Trust in me & I will show you the most incredible & amazing things you ever dreamed.

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10.10.14 2:14

Help !
I need a correction please

Etant donné que le but du forum est d'améliorer et pratiquer notre anglais, nous vous proposons maintenant de corriger vos RP si vous le souhaitez. Bien sur ça n'a rien d'obligatoire. Pour ceux qui sont intéressés, il suffit de poster le petit formulaire à la suite de ce message et un correcteur viendra vers vous. Vous recevrez sa correction par la suite par MP.


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You think about fairy tales, I think about Magic
W-HELL COME TO «MIRACLE», GUESTS


       
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No guild
• Messages : 4335
• I' am : 29

• Type of creature : I'm an elemantary witch



• Location : Not very far away from my home, my hotel


• Room N° : Isilda's area, my area doesn't have number

• Copyright : (c) Piichou & Tumblr

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• Here since : 2008-12-05

I prefer to tell you that I am not the person you thought. I can be dangerous as I can be lovely & openminded. Trust in me & I will show you the most incredible & amazing things you ever dreamed.


Angel's Truth x1 Ataraxia Baby Boom Chiwawas Contrary tells x1 Frogs' P x2 Hair's Color x5 Healthy P Invisibility x1 Love Filter x2 Mind Rubber Moon's Drops x1 Olden P x1 Paralyze Sleepin' Beauty x1 Time Travel x2 Wallsin Wild Blow x1 Against Evil Locket Connected Minds' Ring Magical Pen Twins Mirror Venus' Fragrance Watersweets
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25.01.17 22:11
Hey

I need help ! Laughing

• Titre du RP: Job interview
• Contexte en quelques mots: C'est l'entretien de Susie qui postule pour travailler à l'hôtel.
• Lien du RP: ICI
• Message à corriger:
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Merci d'avance ! I love you
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No guild
• Messages : 4335
• I' am : 29
• Type of creature : I'm an elemantary witch


• Location : Not very far away from my home, my hotel
• Room N° : Isilda's area, my area doesn't have number
• Copyright : (c) Piichou & Tumblr
• Here since : 2008-12-05
I prefer to tell you that I am not the person you thought. I can be dangerous as I can be lovely & openminded. Trust in me & I will show you the most incredible & amazing things you ever dreamed.

Angel's Truth x1
Ataraxia
Baby Boom
Chiwawas
Contrary tells x1
Frogs' P x2
Hair's Color x5
Healthy P
Invisibility x1
Love Filter x2
Mind Rubber
Moon's Drops x1
Olden P x1
Paralyze
Sleepin' Beauty x1
Time Travel x2
Wallsin
Wild Blow x1
Against Evil Locket
Connected Minds' Ring
Magical Pen
Twins Mirror
Venus' Fragrance
Watersweets

Dear Diary


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Isilda Mainsworth
F O U N D E R ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■
Witch - Don't be affraid
29 Y.O. 4335 posts
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02.02.17 0:27
Hey hello miss Wink
Alors voici ce que je mettrais du coup mais globalement, c'est pas mal du tout Smile
Tu es sur la bonne voie Wink

The blond woman tells me to follow her so I obey. I trot behind her and I feel that the stress is increasing at every step. I have some butterflies in my stomach and I don't like this. Anything was as stressful in my native mountain, I am not used to this feeling.

In her office, the woman proposes to me a chair where I sit down. She presents herself as the owner of the hotel. I say yes with the head (I shake my head), a smile on my face, while she catches my resume. She puts it on her desk and I think that she will ask me the first question. I prepare myself to answer, praying in my head to give good answers.
*I have to win the post, I have to win the post, I repeat in my head.*
- Before we're beginning, would you like something to drink?
I'm surprise, I didn't expect this question.
- With pleasure, mineral water please, I answer with a strained smile.

Meantime my glass (arrives), I pull on a lock of hair and I look around me. The desk is nice, like the hotel, though I don’t feel good in the room. I like open spaces. I like green, fresh air and humus smell. All senses and odors are different inside. Wood smell is hidden by varnish and other chemical substances. Without a breeze of air, the atmosphere is quite heavy.



You think about fairy tales, I think about Magic
W-HELL COME TO «MIRACLE», GUESTS


       
Potions & Objects
No guild
• Messages : 4335
• I' am : 29

• Type of creature : I'm an elemantary witch



• Location : Not very far away from my home, my hotel


• Room N° : Isilda's area, my area doesn't have number

• Copyright : (c) Piichou & Tumblr

Biography RelationshipsRP Evolution Phone
• Here since : 2008-12-05

I prefer to tell you that I am not the person you thought. I can be dangerous as I can be lovely & openminded. Trust in me & I will show you the most incredible & amazing things you ever dreamed.


Angel's Truth x1 Ataraxia Baby Boom Chiwawas Contrary tells x1 Frogs' P x2 Hair's Color x5 Healthy P Invisibility x1 Love Filter x2 Mind Rubber Moon's Drops x1 Olden P x1 Paralyze Sleepin' Beauty x1 Time Travel x2 Wallsin Wild Blow x1 Against Evil Locket Connected Minds' Ring Magical Pen Twins Mirror Venus' Fragrance Watersweets
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